ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Literature Text
Make us eternal.
'cause I can't do this,
and I don't have more time,
but I trust you.
Make us eternal.
'cause I can't take you with me,
and I can't take my dreams either,
then I ask you.
Make us eternal.
'cause it was a beautiful life,
and can't disappear that way,
so I beg you.
Make us eternal.
'cause we deserve this,
for the good moments,
and for the bad ones too.
Make us a promise.
Smile our comedy,
cry our tragedy,
tell our story.
Make us eternal.
'cause I can't do this,
and I don't have more time,
but I trust you.
Make us eternal.
'cause I can't take you with me,
and I can't take my dreams either,
then I ask you.
Make us eternal.
'cause it was a beautiful life,
and can't disappear that way,
so I beg you.
Make us eternal.
'cause we deserve this,
for the good moments,
and for the bad ones too.
Make us a promise.
Smile our comedy,
cry our tragedy,
tell our story.
Make us eternal.
Suggested Collections
Featured in Groups
.
© 2010 - 2024 mrTLS
Comments9
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
I really love the way you used repetition in this.
Make us eternal
Make us eternal
Make us eternal
Very effective, and a very good poem.
Make us eternal
Make us eternal
Make us eternal
Very effective, and a very good poem.